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breathe again
cannot wash from my thoughts
the taste of the rain on your lips
after you said you still love me
i heard it as farewell
but chose to fold it away
I'll open it tomorrow
when the clouds grow around me
this would be the last
exchange of each-others oxygen
a breath too short for me
a breath i want to breathe again
the taste of the rain on your lips
after you said you still love me
i heard it as farewell
but chose to fold it away
I'll open it tomorrow
when the clouds grow around me
this would be the last
exchange of each-others oxygen
a breath too short for me
a breath i want to breathe again
Published 5th Mar 2012
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5th Mar 2012 10:35pm
long and deep will always stick in one's mind; whether it is in Hello or in Farewell, MrAlptraum.
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18th Sep 2013 10:44am
I like "the taste of the rain on your lips". And the rest of the poem of course! Nice write
