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THE SWEET RELIEF OF DEATH
a single tear rolls down my face
as i watch everything i have go away
my children, my husband, my life
i have nothing left in this place
a drop of blood hits the floor
as i try to imagine my life before
my children laughs, a smile on their face
i realize how much i will miss that place
the ground turns red as i watch myself bleed
it happened as fast as i lost everything i need
i feel a weight lift as i take my last breath
and i thank god for the sweet relief of death.
as i watch everything i have go away
my children, my husband, my life
i have nothing left in this place
a drop of blood hits the floor
as i try to imagine my life before
my children laughs, a smile on their face
i realize how much i will miss that place
the ground turns red as i watch myself bleed
it happened as fast as i lost everything i need
i feel a weight lift as i take my last breath
and i thank god for the sweet relief of death.
Published 5th Mar 2012
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Anonymous
6th Mar 2012 9:22am
"a single tear rolls down my face
as i watch everything i have go away"
Hope you're getting through it
as i watch everything i have go away"
Hope you're getting through it
6th Mar 2012 1:36pm
I honestly have no words for this. I enjoy but im not sure i should. Its beautiful and full of deep emotion.
7th Mar 2012 00:52am
I can't feel your pain
As easy as it may seem
The way in which you love
I can only in a dream
Your heart has stopped
As any suicide would be
Their are many of us, but
None like you and me
We have done: many have tried
Our pain was so great: we had no hope
So we did what we did
Cause we could not cope
We have a love : seeking the end
We were born to die... Right?
What is it worth living
When their is no one in sight
We will help each other
Even if its a line or two
Not the kind on our wrists
But all the things we can do
We are still here
Not knowing why
They always bring us back
We continue to cry
I will be yours
Only if your mine
We can say fuck the world; or
Enjoy each others time.
As easy as it may seem
The way in which you love
I can only in a dream
Your heart has stopped
As any suicide would be
Their are many of us, but
None like you and me
We have done: many have tried
Our pain was so great: we had no hope
So we did what we did
Cause we could not cope
We have a love : seeking the end
We were born to die... Right?
What is it worth living
When their is no one in sight
We will help each other
Even if its a line or two
Not the kind on our wrists
But all the things we can do
We are still here
Not knowing why
They always bring us back
We continue to cry
I will be yours
Only if your mine
We can say fuck the world; or
Enjoy each others time.
