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The masculine
To form the bond to clasp
to add your jeans into that bank
It rules our lives
the rise and fall
from song of dawn
the nesting, call for which we grope
our southern thoughts
stuck back in stone-age times
aware of feelings greater plains
the beast awaiting to be tamed
to add your jeans into that bank
It rules our lives
the rise and fall
from song of dawn
the nesting, call for which we grope
our southern thoughts
stuck back in stone-age times
aware of feelings greater plains
the beast awaiting to be tamed
Published 3rd Dec 2021
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4th Dec 2021 4:58pm
27th Feb 2022 00:32am
Ah, a Free Verse! 🍂
One-a m'favorite poetical forms to compose in!
And, a beaut 'tis, Sir Poet.
Primal man. alpha, macho subjugator of the human gender … what a uniquely original concept to pen, and with such force-driven skill. L2, I read "jeans" as "genes".
Tho, mankind, as a whole, seems somewhat tamed and docile, there's scant doubt man will ever be.
Thoughts left and inspired to ponder … as good poetry is apt to do!
Thank you most gratefully for the share! ⁓ Richard🖌
One-a m'favorite poetical forms to compose in!
And, a beaut 'tis, Sir Poet.
Primal man. alpha, macho subjugator of the human gender … what a uniquely original concept to pen, and with such force-driven skill. L2, I read "jeans" as "genes".
Tho, mankind, as a whole, seems somewhat tamed and docile, there's scant doubt man will ever be.
Thoughts left and inspired to ponder … as good poetry is apt to do!
Thank you most gratefully for the share! ⁓ Richard🖌
