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don't thaw
ice burn doesn't melt just because there's a flame
a blue infused hue warms the frigid night
but darkness controls and takes another bite
of the mind, fighting, trying to stay on tight
in the theater of what is wrong or right
it's a rite, a passage thru times
leaving thought behind
straying outside the lines
of loneliness
when life has closed her eyes
you see it different
inside looking out
you yell, still no one hears you shout
or whisper their name
things remain the same
abandoned with the pain
taking it one shot at a time
beaten and not getting up(set)
cause you haven't seen anything yet
moments frozen in the mind
*don't thaw*
you don't know what you'll find
a blue infused hue warms the frigid night
but darkness controls and takes another bite
of the mind, fighting, trying to stay on tight
in the theater of what is wrong or right
it's a rite, a passage thru times
leaving thought behind
straying outside the lines
of loneliness
when life has closed her eyes
you see it different
inside looking out
you yell, still no one hears you shout
or whisper their name
things remain the same
abandoned with the pain
taking it one shot at a time
beaten and not getting up(set)
cause you haven't seen anything yet
moments frozen in the mind
*don't thaw*
you don't know what you'll find
Published 27th Nov 2021
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27th Nov 2021 8:47pm
28th Nov 2021 1:13pm
28th Nov 2021 5:42am
Sometime our internal struggles.. you know, those thoughts that you wouldn't want anyone else knowing, can be so brutal... to breathlessness... Is my experience.
Really poignantly aching.... and utterly relatable.
Thanks for sharing.
🌹 - 💙
B
Really poignantly aching.... and utterly relatable.
Thanks for sharing.
🌹 - 💙
B
28th Nov 2021 1:14pm
