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Leave Nothing Undone
As I gazed at her naked form,
my conscience whispered,
“In our few remaining days,
we’ll not be condemned for what we did,
but those things left undone.”
I answered, “And so, my morally bankrupt friend,
let us leave nothing undone.”
I thought of that earlier conversation as I viewed her sleeping,
thankful for the pleasures we had shared and wondering
how many days we had remaining.
my conscience whispered,
“In our few remaining days,
we’ll not be condemned for what we did,
but those things left undone.”
I answered, “And so, my morally bankrupt friend,
let us leave nothing undone.”
I thought of that earlier conversation as I viewed her sleeping,
thankful for the pleasures we had shared and wondering
how many days we had remaining.
Published 20th Nov 2021
| Edited 24th Nov 2021
Author's Note
Today I learned of the death of a former love. Too young! I was thankful that we'd left nothing undone.
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20th Nov 2021 6:27pm
20th Apr 2022 7:17pm
Picture prompted the rhyming caption:
She slept the sleep of the satisfied
the 'morning after' our midnight ride,
too faraway to notice the sheets
were not covering her upfaced teats,
nor the bewitching bikini line
that I had eagerly claimed for mine,
her fair haired head to one side lying;
did she know soon she would be dying?
She slept the sleep of the satisfied
the 'morning after' our midnight ride,
too faraway to notice the sheets
were not covering her upfaced teats,
nor the bewitching bikini line
that I had eagerly claimed for mine,
her fair haired head to one side lying;
did she know soon she would be dying?
20th Apr 2022 7:54pm
The poem has since developed into a three verse piece I have just posted in this section titled Did She Know She Would Be Dying?
13th May 2023 6:55pm
A look at the picture again suggests she left "plenty undone" (in form of her clothes being elsewhere than on herself) LOL.
