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That line of too far, too close, too much

I watch it recede
in my rear view

again

Written by brokentitanium

(k.)

Published 12th Nov 2021

Author's Note

moments of weakness

#crush #love #minimalist #regret #risk

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Re. That line of too far, too close, too much

12th Nov 2021 2:55am

Report to the Chamber promptly

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Re. That line of too far, too close, too much

13th Nov 2021 11:42pm

I remember a time�.

This is relatable, K.

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Re. That line of too far, too close, too much

12th Dec 2021 3:20am

Short and sharp like a knife.
Great work

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