Green Tea

I did this for another poetry site, and thought I would post it here as well.

I don't know about the ins and outs of micro poetry.
I know what i like though and i like this.

I think the idea is to capture as much as possible in as few words and i think you done pretty good here.

I am wondering if you intended to switch from "this bath" to personifying the water.

anyhoo  good stuff, shine on!

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I have no idea what the meaning is behind this poem, which I have never done before. I kind of like that, in this case, because it allow for a range of interpretations from readers.

And I don't know much about micro poetry either.

thanks for reading and commenting

very nice indeed short but well written