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On Purging Therapeutic Pens
how are we molded
by those at home?
the subtle influences
that shape a child’s life
seeing deeper into mine
living within a trauma
response such as fight,
flight, freeze, or fawn
yet in but a cosmic yawn
we are swallowed, made gone
so I will struggle gently on
until ego here is absolved
by those at home?
the subtle influences
that shape a child’s life
seeing deeper into mine
living within a trauma
response such as fight,
flight, freeze, or fawn
yet in but a cosmic yawn
we are swallowed, made gone
so I will struggle gently on
until ego here is absolved
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Re. On Purging Therapeutic Pens
6th Nov 2021 9:09pm
Deep and personal feeling but such is truth.
Yhank you for adding me lady
-Charles
Yhank you for adding me lady
-Charles
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15th Nov 2021 1:18pm
Thank you for the thoughtful feedback steg, your remarks here actually haven't left my mind since I read them.
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Anonymous
10th Nov 2021 3:15pm
Wow Bird……I just relived moments of the past…….I’m glad to read writes that have let your soul of past hurt release…….it’s the best thing for you……I’ve been thru all that you write……still brings tears……guess that deep pain never goes away completely…….here if you need to talk…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. On Purging Therapeutic Pens
13th Nov 2021 2:43pm
This is powerful writing, deep and somewhat haunting. It took me back to past trauma that shaped who I am today. It was very difficult to live through some things but still we can gather our strength and persevere. The pen can be so therapeutic in helping to purge the bad sometimes.
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15th Nov 2021 1:43pm
True words, Kristina. I've been contemplating my mortality for the past few months, so this write has indeed come out a bit haunting. I feel motivated by the finite nature of time I have left on this earth.
Thanks for reading me.
Thanks for reading me.
Re. On Purging Therapeutic Pens
13th Nov 2021 10:15pm
Very compact writing style. Which isn’t easy to do in my opinion. Great write.
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