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I feel you
as lovers
we meet
in my dreams
I feel you
in every breath
in the liquid
the flows
through my veins
my heart aches
to see you again
your smile
is etched
in my memories
the endless dreams
in your eyes
your touch
your kiss
your taste
I long
to consume you
we meet
in my dreams
I feel you
in every breath
in the liquid
the flows
through my veins
my heart aches
to see you again
your smile
is etched
in my memories
the endless dreams
in your eyes
your touch
your kiss
your taste
I long
to consume you
Published 3rd Nov 2021
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
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3rd Nov 2021 11:11am
within the dream
can be a special place.
thank you for sharing this write.
can be a special place.
thank you for sharing this write.
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13th Nov 2021 5:12am
Nice love poem.
I can feel the emotions when reading and can definitely relate.
I like the short lines and accessable word choice--
makes the piece more palatable.
You are a good poet!
I shall keep reading.
I can feel the emotions when reading and can definitely relate.
I like the short lines and accessable word choice--
makes the piece more palatable.
You are a good poet!
I shall keep reading.
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