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Soft_lilac
In the odeon of dreams,
she comes to me,
gliding her hand onto mine.
The love of two souls,
breaking the mould,
into the lilac breeze.
Where are you now?
My angel unbound;
why must it end this way?
We were untouched
in an ocean of lust,
longing to kiss you someday.
she comes to me,
gliding her hand onto mine.
The love of two souls,
breaking the mould,
into the lilac breeze.
Where are you now?
My angel unbound;
why must it end this way?
We were untouched
in an ocean of lust,
longing to kiss you someday.
Published 28th Oct 2021
Author's Note
I miss her...
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28th Oct 2021 3:20am
Very smooth write. I like the rhymes going where they fall, don't know if you meant to, but it works. This is nice.
28th Oct 2021 9:38am
Thanks for your comments. I added some rhyme for effect. She really touched me.
28th Oct 2021 3:42am
28th Oct 2021 9:43am
I don't know if she will read this, but I really do miss her.There is chemistry between us. She's a talented writer and a beautiful woman.
28th Oct 2021 9:03am
Such a precious feeling; love, and all that that entails when you know it’s a mutual flow of heart, soul & pure sex energy…😇🙏🏼
28th Oct 2021 9:46am
Love is a strange thing. It can take you to a heavenly place. I wrote this for a woman I admire. She is perfect in every way and I hope she returns to DUP, because it feels empty without her.
20th Nov 2021 11:38am
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