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Was it me?
But why didn’t you love me?
Was I too loud?
Or not loud enough?
Was I too bold?
Or too shy?
Please tell me
I beg of you
For I, a simple girl
Can nor bear the thought
That you shall not be mine.
Was I too loud?
Or not loud enough?
Was I too bold?
Or too shy?
Please tell me
I beg of you
For I, a simple girl
Can nor bear the thought
That you shall not be mine.
Published 25th Oct 2021
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- Edited 29th Jan 2022 7:45am
25th Oct 2021 8:33am
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25th Oct 2021 12:35pm
Dear LB,
I admire how you’ve penned self doubt when love has been unrequited. Questions I know I’ve pondered in such situations. There is a lovely reminiscence of old world style, like EB Browning in your writing. Welcome to DU. Great write. H🌷
I admire how you’ve penned self doubt when love has been unrequited. Questions I know I’ve pondered in such situations. There is a lovely reminiscence of old world style, like EB Browning in your writing. Welcome to DU. Great write. H🌷
