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The lover I crave
as the water
drips down
her every curve
sweet passion
cascades from
her hardened nipples
thoughts of him
invade her mind
his demanding touch
feeds her hungry flesh
her body
is on fire
needing him
wanting him
craving him
fingers penetrate
her aching heat
one - two - three
gasping
feeling her depths
feeling her warmth
her hips thrust
diving her fingers
deeper and deeper
soft moans
slip from her
perfect lips
as she explodes
letting her lust
flow freely
satisfied
until the thoughts
take over again
drips down
her every curve
sweet passion
cascades from
her hardened nipples
thoughts of him
invade her mind
his demanding touch
feeds her hungry flesh
her body
is on fire
needing him
wanting him
craving him
fingers penetrate
her aching heat
one - two - three
gasping
feeling her depths
feeling her warmth
her hips thrust
diving her fingers
deeper and deeper
soft moans
slip from her
perfect lips
as she explodes
letting her lust
flow freely
satisfied
until the thoughts
take over again
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Re. The lover I crave
20th Oct 2021 3:03am
This line plays over and over "feeds her hungry flesh", I could feel the touch of my lover reading this.
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20th Oct 2021 3:06am
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Re. The lover I crave
20th Oct 2021 3:41am
Like the sun cycle - "satisfied (sunset) until the thoughts take over again (sunrise)!"
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20th Oct 2021 10:23am
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Re. The lover I crave
13th Nov 2021 5:18am
Very well written.
You take the reader for a visceral journey. I liked the discriptions and you kept a good balance of not going to far. This is good erotica.
You take the reader for a visceral journey. I liked the discriptions and you kept a good balance of not going to far. This is good erotica.
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Re: Re. The lover I crave
13th Nov 2021 5:19am
Such a lovely comment. I appreciate you taking the time to read my words.
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13th Nov 2021 5:31am