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lost in a moment
i see her there staring
out past the kitchen window
with daisy print curtains
partly obscuring the sky
her eyes daunting amid the sunlight
shining deeply upon the beauty inside
i address her while undressing her in my mind
i stroke her cheekbones
and lay kisses upon her neck
so soft, smooth, supple and truly divine
caressing her demure deity
that's begging to unwind
the wind wraps her body
exhaling persuasions of mind
fingers frolic engraving wonderment
enhanced to the pressure inside
we disentangle
lost in a moment
forgetting time that has slipped us by
out past the kitchen window
with daisy print curtains
partly obscuring the sky
her eyes daunting amid the sunlight
shining deeply upon the beauty inside
i address her while undressing her in my mind
i stroke her cheekbones
and lay kisses upon her neck
so soft, smooth, supple and truly divine
caressing her demure deity
that's begging to unwind
the wind wraps her body
exhaling persuasions of mind
fingers frolic engraving wonderment
enhanced to the pressure inside
we disentangle
lost in a moment
forgetting time that has slipped us by
Published 13th Oct 2021
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13th Oct 2021 11:04pm
I could really use a massage about now and this was like a massage with words. Feeling relief as the knots loosen. ;) Really enjoyed this sweet sensual write.
13th Oct 2021 11:07pm
My hands would be honored to relive your tension...thanks K for your beautiful response x
13th Oct 2021 11:18pm
From the daisy print curtains to the disentangle, his thoughts remained delicately sensual. Nicely lost in a moment.
13th Oct 2021 11:21pm
14th Oct 2021 00:47am
Sweet and sensual. The way you use words so delicately, to paint such vivid pictures, is incredible.
14th Oct 2021 1:23am
14th Oct 2021 1:52am
good evening dearest Tim wow... this is beautiful...
"the wind wraps her body
exhaling persuasions of mind
fingers frolic engraving wonderment
enhanced to the pressure inside"
this is pure magic...
"the wind wraps her body
exhaling persuasions of mind
fingers frolic engraving wonderment
enhanced to the pressure inside"
this is pure magic...
14th Oct 2021 1:59am
14th Oct 2021 2:05am
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
14th Oct 2021 2:15am
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