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ALL OF A SUDDEN
Buried and still breathing inside this sand dune..
Show me the new things that you know under this shining sun..
We are sighting this moon at noon..
So, tell me all the new things which you know under a shining sun..
Inside this grave me and all these creatures lying you all know this Canned Sardines..
Inside here, right here am their Prison Warden..
Relentlessly praying and sobbing at the same time to one day touch the door steps of Eden's Garden..
While this got written I don't actually know what I was doing up until am done..
And until am gone..
This beats tells you it's all of a sudden..
All we got in here..
Rotten bag of bones..
Not a single strand of hair, you see no saloons.. Saloons!..
Something's keep bursting like balloons.. Balloons!..
I'm color blinded everything looks maroon.. Maroon!..
And don't mistake us for some work of art, we are not cartoons.. Cartoons!
Of each other we are just copies of carbon.. Together we glued it's a stigma bond..
We crave for meal in here, please provide us with some corn..
We are done..
Curiously asking where are we from?
Hoping against hope that a certain angel will blow their horn..
This is not in any way a joke coz on my head, I got me some heavy loans..
That's why night and day I mourn..
All of a sudden..
Something's new is happening under a shining sun..
No where to run..
See, there's something happening under this rising sun..
No feelings nor emotions I got none..
As poor as a church mouse I often wonder is there anything I own?..
No where to run..
The only new thing under this shining sun.. Guess I must wait until my turn..
It doesn't matter the vegetation Eco..
It's all of a sudden..
It can go taiga, tundra..
Temperate or the tropics..
It's all of a sudden..
It can reach as far as the deserts, savannahs or the grasslands..
All of a sudden..
Northern pampas or the southern prairie..
Something nasty..
Under this sun..
Something naughty..
Under the sun..
Something scary..
All of a sudden..
Ma, there's something new happening under this rising sun..
And until am gone..
This beats tells you it's all of a sudden..
Show me the new things that you know under this shining sun..
We are sighting this moon at noon..
So, tell me all the new things which you know under a shining sun..
Inside this grave me and all these creatures lying you all know this Canned Sardines..
Inside here, right here am their Prison Warden..
Relentlessly praying and sobbing at the same time to one day touch the door steps of Eden's Garden..
While this got written I don't actually know what I was doing up until am done..
And until am gone..
This beats tells you it's all of a sudden..
All we got in here..
Rotten bag of bones..
Not a single strand of hair, you see no saloons.. Saloons!..
Something's keep bursting like balloons.. Balloons!..
I'm color blinded everything looks maroon.. Maroon!..
And don't mistake us for some work of art, we are not cartoons.. Cartoons!
Of each other we are just copies of carbon.. Together we glued it's a stigma bond..
We crave for meal in here, please provide us with some corn..
We are done..
Curiously asking where are we from?
Hoping against hope that a certain angel will blow their horn..
This is not in any way a joke coz on my head, I got me some heavy loans..
That's why night and day I mourn..
All of a sudden..
Something's new is happening under a shining sun..
No where to run..
See, there's something happening under this rising sun..
No feelings nor emotions I got none..
As poor as a church mouse I often wonder is there anything I own?..
No where to run..
The only new thing under this shining sun.. Guess I must wait until my turn..
It doesn't matter the vegetation Eco..
It's all of a sudden..
It can go taiga, tundra..
Temperate or the tropics..
It's all of a sudden..
It can reach as far as the deserts, savannahs or the grasslands..
All of a sudden..
Northern pampas or the southern prairie..
Something nasty..
Under this sun..
Something naughty..
Under the sun..
Something scary..
All of a sudden..
Ma, there's something new happening under this rising sun..
And until am gone..
This beats tells you it's all of a sudden..
Published 13th Oct 2021
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13th Oct 2021 6:20pm
This is what I call the sweetest progression of poetry with the eyes and a soft transfixion of the mind to submerge in your gift of words. You my have been on a sabbatical but this musing speaks for the return to your canvass as being a declaration, which echoes self-discovery and heartfelt enlightment.. this is a very honorable read my Nigerian King
13th Oct 2021 6:49pm
And this is what I call the coolest heart warming critical response from an adorable soul.. Your compliment means a lot than you can ever imagine my queen..
Love and hug..
Love and hug..
13th Oct 2021 7:12pm
13th Oct 2021 11:17pm
Hey there Numer :)
The depth of inspiration, intensity and deep questioning make for a thought provoker of a poem. Your specifically in tune poetic voice leads to individual introspection and wondering of our own stages of being..... Human nature and loss or the attempts of reconciling those emotions.... Were my thoughts....
I thank you for sharing with us, it's nice to see you've returned 🦋
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
The depth of inspiration, intensity and deep questioning make for a thought provoker of a poem. Your specifically in tune poetic voice leads to individual introspection and wondering of our own stages of being..... Human nature and loss or the attempts of reconciling those emotions.... Were my thoughts....
I thank you for sharing with us, it's nice to see you've returned 🦋
Warmest regards,
🌹 - B
14th Oct 2021 1:47pm
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