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The Grace of the Gothic Rose (A Triolet)
O' how the gothic rose bleeds
see her withered darkness so graceful
planted down deeply grows seeds
O' how the gothic rose bleeds
the winds whistles amongst the reeds
she stares into the faces of the faithful
O' how the gothic rose bleeds
see her withered darkness so graceful
see her withered darkness so graceful
planted down deeply grows seeds
O' how the gothic rose bleeds
the winds whistles amongst the reeds
she stares into the faces of the faithful
O' how the gothic rose bleeds
see her withered darkness so graceful
Published 11th Oct 2021
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11th Oct 2021 2:24am
Hi there Randall :)
Really excellent imagery and uses of your great rhyming skills. The triolet format makes for such a wonderfully potent sense of darkness, like a little bit of a Grimm's Fairytale kind of feeling.
An enjoyable read!
Thank you for sharing 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
Really excellent imagery and uses of your great rhyming skills. The triolet format makes for such a wonderfully potent sense of darkness, like a little bit of a Grimm's Fairytale kind of feeling.
An enjoyable read!
Thank you for sharing 🙏🏻
🌹 - B
11th Oct 2021 11:57am
Thank you BlueVelvete I really appreciate your kind words, and I was taken aback by the comparison of the brothers Grimm...yes it does have a kind of fairy tale essence...
14th Oct 2021 11:50am
The repetition gives a an echoing and haunting feeling.
Wonderful imagery.
Righteous darkness.
Wonderful imagery.
Righteous darkness.
