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Just
want to see her smile
look in her eyes
hear her laugh
see her dimples
hear her voice
listen to her stories
her tales, her adventures
i just want to tell her
a million times over
the beauty she carries
look in her eyes
hear her laugh
see her dimples
hear her voice
listen to her stories
her tales, her adventures
i just want to tell her
a million times over
the beauty she carries
Published 3rd Oct 2021
| Edited 14th Apr 2024
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3rd Oct 2021 5:35am
Sometimes, that’s all a girl needs, without having to compete for one’s affections.
Such a beautiful sentiment…🙏😇
Such a beautiful sentiment…🙏😇
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10th Oct 2021 11:40am
10th Oct 2021 2:15pm
What a great poem. Every word in it is saying, "l love you very much, dear." This is great poetry. It's full of true feeling, that flows naturally and in the simplest way without false sophisticated images.
11th Oct 2021 3:46pm
