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The Intimacy of a Moment with a "Friend"  (9/27/21)

        
       
Candy rain        
Comin' down        
Taste you in my mind        
And spread you all around....
       
       
       
“a splendid day”        
       
…....your reaction to the “gifts”        
absolutely blew me away        
       
my “special” day, indeed        
I so badly wanted it to be yours        
longing to fulfill your every need of        
       
me.....        
       
feels like heaven        
       
…...the way you made me smile        
we hung around outside        
and we just talked for awhile        
and right on cue,        
fate held the right cards; she knew exactly just what to do  
in the moment   ........     
       
......you called me “friend” and my reply, "I Love You"      
       
there in the cool of the night        
you hugged me        
and we squeezed each other tight        
for a moment inside this        
pandemic existence, everything just seemed right        
       
echoed whispers        
there beneath the moon and the stars        
you spoke,        
       
“I love you, love you, love you....”        
        
In my mind        
and right before my eyes        
the universe is realigned        
       
for you and I        
       
helping her into her car        
I touched her hand as she drove        
off into the night......be still my beating heart        
       
“.....the blue light was my baby, and the red light was my mind”        
       
“Under the moon and over the sky”............I lay you down        
upon the cool green Autumn grass        
the union of our kindred spirits        
making love at long last        
the heavens and the earth illuminate,        
the glow of the pale moonlight        
cast shadows upon our wonder        
       
“let no man, no woman put asunder......”    
       
wrapped inside each other,        
holding each other  for dear life        
as the trembling starts to subside        
at long last we release our        
visions of love made into the night sky
       
       
      parlayed into an intimate memory of you,  my beautiful “friend”
Written by MusicallyMrM (Mr_Mahogany_Wood)
Published | Edited 30th Sep 2021
Author's Note
.....an autobiographical sketch that reads more like a short story than a poem. A memory of a Monday night past with a friend that may have changed a 20 year relationship in the twinkling of an eye.

Most of my friends and followers know I'm a musician so it will come as no surprise that there are a few musical inflections within this cross-cultural creation including:

"Juicy Fruit" by Mtume
"Feels Like Heaven" by Chaka Khan and Peter Cetera
"Reminisce" by Mary J. Blige
"Love in Vain" by Robert Johnson
"Under the Moon and Over The Sky" by Angela Bofill

Hope that you enjoy my rambling here. Monday was my birthday and this (however strange the setting) was a perfect gift 😘
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