Fabled___ (pt.1) Inherent joy(s)

love the 'thine', 'writhe' and avatar...alluring look...

Thanks for the compliment, Lawrence. I am deeply appreciative of your visits and adore that we have that kinship love of archaic language...  
It's always a pleasure ✨

So glad you enjoyed

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B

lovely words here, enjoyed this very much

Your kindness is so lovely to have permeate my page, Journey. Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me your thoughtful remarks.



I wholly appreciate it - 💙
🌹 - B

Show me all that passion.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

I'll do my best!
Thanks for stopping by and being such a kind and faithful reader.


-🌹

Go girl absolutely great write
Love and light
Ron xx

Thanks for reading and the kind RL add as well.
Always nice seeing you
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I'm all for a passionate poetic journey, Blue.  You have succeeded in providing such. Love the archaic intent of the language.


hugs,
buddhakitty.

bk!!!... Yes :)
I am definitely trying.... (to create a passionate journey!)
Thanks for the lovely comments, bk
I adore seeing you and your kind thoughts on my page... 🦋
Hopefully my series pans out!🤞🏻


Much love your way ✨
🌹 - B

I throw my soul upon the seas of fate
following a map of my desire
the map embellished with hidden dangers
"there be monsters here".
The quest dear shapely damsel
the holy grail
the trinity of love and lust and desire
awaits the lion hearted warrior
of my heart.

And investigating that trinity of love, lust and desire, is exactly where my little poems and I hope to traverse, my dear shaman!  
 
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and insights with me, Richard. I was wavering about this poem and the course of action, to pursue a potential series, going forward .... I'm still not feeling 100% about it but your lovely remarks, have reinforced my waning motivation; resurrecting my will to want to continue down this possible path.... I just hope that I can continue to create something worth publishing and reading..... That motivation you inspire, means the world to me. I am so so grateful for you and your brightness. Your emanating heart and soul— I feel it from here...
 - 🙏🏻  
 
 
Much love and all my warmest appreciation,  
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-S

Great use of words
Very emotionally intriguing...

I can only imagine this on an open mic
It'll be quiet a trip

Great ink

Thanks so much for visiting POft! I really appreciate your comments and insights ... I was just thinking of possibly adding audio to this, so we'll see how it goes!!

Such a pleasure to see you ✨
🌹 - 💙
B

This is super cool B.

I was just saying how I feel like every work of art might be consolidated into a singular idea, and every idea might be expanded into different forms...  A novel to a poem, a poem to a painting, a painting to a song.

I feel like I can see this phenomenon at work in this piece, where the content/format seems to extend beyond the form of poetry and harken to the form(s) that it might take.

I like the symmetry of the write and the application of different devices that moved the piece in interesting ways.

Wonderful.

(Look forward to future installments in the series.)

I am still unable to fully get behind this poem.... I don't know what it is about it.... If I'm taking it down permanently... (I've already done so and put it back up twice now) ... lmao....

Your words are soo kind.... but maybe that idea of series is too much... I dunno...

Thanks for having faith.... I wish I did, too...
Much love and respect, my friend
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B

Dear BV,

I really love the style of language you’ve used in this poem. I really enjoyed the subject written about and your conveyance. I felt rather transported to a romantic dimension. This was really lovely and exciting at the same time.
H🌷

Thanks, H
I will take 'lovely and exciting' any day!!!
I wholeheartedly appreciate you, and your kind words.... Your support and encouraging essence makes me motivated to do and be what it is that I strive most for.... better.  

I created this on a  bit of a whim, so I'm extremely grateful that you're able to take away anything of worth or interest... I am not down playing or anything... this piece was /has been giving me issues from the get go.... but sometimes those are the ones that tend to be most interesting in the end, especially when I go back and re-read....

I think reminding myself, not to be so hard on myself, which I know I sound like a broken record... 🙄jeez!.... lol... sometimes it IS much easier said than done..... So, I gently remind.... hahaha.  

I very much appreciate you, lovely lady.
You're awesome - ✨
🌹 - B

I liked this one Blue. I liked that playful passion with lines like "Launch thine arrows, piercing usual thought". It's pretty amazing that you're able to compose so refreshingly on a daily basis.

Awesome work.

I swell and rush in your poetic cadence , the hunger that sleeps within me in dormancy, stirs and purrs as my eyes gaze into you vision, sharing vicariously that same joy

And isn't that the hidden hope? To silently share that deep innate joy, in quiet and profound understanding. No questioning or explanations needed.... only connectedness.


You get it.
Without a doubt.

Thank you for being attune
It's priceless.
🌹 💙

A celebration of lyrical liberation! If Shakespeare had been a woman this is what he'd have written. You fly free here into an ecstasy unbounded. The sheer exhilaration in your words brought me joy unending. This is what poetry can be with a gifted poet. You reached into the sky with your pen and created feminine frolic for the ages. Love Love where this took me.

XoXoXo
John

You're so kind and generous, my dear kindred soul.... I am beyond grateful... and catapulted into another sphere of appreciation.

Thank you so much for being here and partaking in me, my older writing and just sharing your amazing insights, John... It makes such a great difference to me that your very well tuned eye, sees what it does.

Always your deeply enduring admirer
-💙
Susan