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To Be One With You
“Angel I want to be one with you”
don’t fly to high for me reach
the vibrations you create
mend all my hurts
Splendor divine touching humanity
spirits dancing in the flesh
treasures not monetized
surround my presence
The monotony of the day
gives way to the eroticism
found in the tiniest grains
of sand and hope
Thoughts of embrace
wash over the infallibilities
that lead to feelings
of unworthiness
Leaving but one inquiry
is this an impermanent
sensation of the
answer to a cry in the dark?
don’t fly to high for me reach
the vibrations you create
mend all my hurts
Splendor divine touching humanity
spirits dancing in the flesh
treasures not monetized
surround my presence
The monotony of the day
gives way to the eroticism
found in the tiniest grains
of sand and hope
Thoughts of embrace
wash over the infallibilities
that lead to feelings
of unworthiness
Leaving but one inquiry
is this an impermanent
sensation of the
answer to a cry in the dark?
Published 26th Sep 2021
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26th Sep 2021 6:02pm
Oh my King, this is simply beautiful... I love your approach to cloak your musing what a soft touch of divinity, you never seem to amaze me, however, when you do, it always leaves me with such a profound poetic sentiment to relish
26th Sep 2021 7:32pm
I won’t say I amaze myself but very rarely do I have a plan in my head before giving ink to my thoughts. In this case I though I was going to add to a song.
Kudos for reading!
Kudos for reading!
26th Sep 2021 7:35pm
26th Sep 2021 6:52pm
Such a potently pleasurable and astute poetic offering. I adore your written idea of the smallest littlest thing, that can possibly bring the most profound and deeply felt ignition of passion.... Sometimes, it really IS the little things...
I was swept up and enjoyed reading this, immensely.
Thanks for the lovely share - 💙
🌹 - B
I was swept up and enjoyed reading this, immensely.
Thanks for the lovely share - 💙
🌹 - B
26th Sep 2021 7:37pm
The real credit goes to Booker T. Jones and Carlos Santana. I just added to the theme of the song, “One With You”.
27th Sep 2021 2:19am
29th Sep 2021 8:42pm
28th Sep 2021 1:54am
Carlos Santana, now that's a genius to borrow from
Don't know about your guitar skills, but your wordsmithing definitely holds its own
Very nice ink
Don't know about your guitar skills, but your wordsmithing definitely holds its own
Very nice ink
29th Sep 2021 8:46pm
Not so bad rhythm guitar player. My lead is passable on maybe one or two songs. Now I think I could hang in there on the bass.
That song is so memorable because the singing gives way very quickly to Carlos and Jimmie Vaughan jamming.
That song is so memorable because the singing gives way very quickly to Carlos and Jimmie Vaughan jamming.
