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My Memory
I remember
We rubbed parts together,
made sweet music with our moans,
Your hands parting thighs
head between my scone
Tongue slipping into to spaces
I never knew I owned.
I remember we toured the house
leaving sweaty prints on cupboard, floors and bathroom walls
I remember you surrendered
And ofcourse I take control,
The look in your eyes
Told me all I needed to know,
how hard to suck,
when not to stop
God I love your tones,
And when I'm convinced
you've had enough
and your body
loses hold,
Tighter the grip
Faster the slip
Until your flute was blown
We rubbed parts together,
made sweet music with our moans,
Your hands parting thighs
head between my scone
Tongue slipping into to spaces
I never knew I owned.
I remember we toured the house
leaving sweaty prints on cupboard, floors and bathroom walls
I remember you surrendered
And ofcourse I take control,
The look in your eyes
Told me all I needed to know,
how hard to suck,
when not to stop
God I love your tones,
And when I'm convinced
you've had enough
and your body
loses hold,
Tighter the grip
Faster the slip
Until your flute was blown
Author's Note
A little vivid memory
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Re. My Memory
24th Sep 2021 6:01am
Reads like a couple 'christening' a house they have just moved into by making love in every room.
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24th Sep 2021 10:47am
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22nd Mar 2024 2:16am
Re. My Memory
25th Sep 2021 00:21am
Scone, lol, really? Classy. Certainly has its moments. Interesting words.
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25th Sep 2021 2:05am
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Re. My Memory
4th Nov 2021 7:20pm
I always seem to be drawn to intimate erotica with soft and gentle musical overtones......I love the allusion to blowing the flute. #memoriesofaflautistembouchure #agentlebreatheagainsttheskin Good Stuff
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8th Nov 2021 11:20am
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Re. My Memory
2nd Aug 2022 8:09pm
Have just re-read this. Favourite lines (for eroticism):
Tighter the grip
Faster the slip
Until your flute was blown
Tighter the grip
Faster the slip
Until your flute was blown
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Re. My Memory
21st Mar 2024 4:00pm
Are you a realtor? You cold probably sell me a house with this poem! LOL
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22nd Mar 2024 2:18am