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I belong to you
affectionate feelings swell within me
I crush on your looks but its more than that
your intellect kisses my soul
tells me what I mean to you
sharp witted I know you understand me
cutting but kind
you bring the heat
sinister smiles turn me on
cleft to your side
I look to you
no guile will you find in my eyes
pure of desire
I feel you pulsing through me
electric charges from your aura
touch all my pleasure zones
it's what you do to me
on the aether our soul's dance
two become one
a soul fucking
in love with each other
the deepest touch I've ever known
Published 22nd Sep 2021
Author's Note
inspired by this song kind of takes me back to the neighborhood I lived in as a teen....
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SK5bm69-W_Y
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SK5bm69-W_Y
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22nd Sep 2021 6:27am
A sharp mind is needed to solve the intricacies and complexity to get to your heart.
The lust is appreciated upon arrival. Once that bond develops magic.
Enjoyed your poem.
The lust is appreciated upon arrival. Once that bond develops magic.
Enjoyed your poem.
23rd Sep 2021 6:58pm
thank you graciously dearest DaVinci for reading and leaving such a beautiful comment💗
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2021 6:32am
"a soul fucking"--what a line!
That's the kind of line you don't see every day wow!
There's a kind of innocent, straightforward honesty in this, and that's mentioned in the poem--"no guile...in my eyes" that gives it distinct feeling, as far as the erotic poetry I find on dup.
Nice stuff!
That's the kind of line you don't see every day wow!
There's a kind of innocent, straightforward honesty in this, and that's mentioned in the poem--"no guile...in my eyes" that gives it distinct feeling, as far as the erotic poetry I find on dup.
Nice stuff!
23rd Sep 2021 7:00pm
hi there dearest Mark that line made me a bit uncomfortable but it represented the truth of how I feel... I'm so happy it worked for you thank you dear poet for the love on this write💗
22nd Sep 2021 7:53am
Smashed clean out the park, fantastic write. Awesome read
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
23rd Sep 2021 8:50pm
hey there dearest Ron thank you giggles I'm blushing thank you I deeply appreciate you💗
22nd Sep 2021 4:40pm
crimsin,
Beautiful way to signify that it’s more the senses that first must be stroked rather than the physical body. Keep on dancing!
down2dirt
Beautiful way to signify that it’s more the senses that first must be stroked rather than the physical body. Keep on dancing!
down2dirt
23rd Sep 2021 8:51pm
18th Oct 2021 4:29am
"your intellect kisses my soul" shows how much intelligence is a big attraction for many, allowing someone to express themselves eloquently t convey these emotions.
Great write.
Great write.
18th Oct 2021 4:26pm
good morning dearest Wally yes intelligence and wisdom so beautiful ❤ thank you for reading and leaving a thoughtful comment it's appreciated...
