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PICTURE OF PERFECTION
Picture of perfection -
riding the erection
now cumming and throbbing,
hair and loose tits bobbing,
face lost in ecstasy
as seed flows out of me,
mouth open in climax,
then on me you relax
as our breaths recover
from pounding each other.
riding the erection
now cumming and throbbing,
hair and loose tits bobbing,
face lost in ecstasy
as seed flows out of me,
mouth open in climax,
then on me you relax
as our breaths recover
from pounding each other.
Published 20th Sep 2021
Author's Note
Inspired by Eightmore's poem Perfection, whose accompanying picture is shown here for which this is a poetic caption.
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20th Sep 2021 6:43am
20th Sep 2021 9:36am
You borrowed and used the picture to perfection. You were indeed inspired. Glad I could help. I found the picture after I wrote the poem.
It is indeed:
"The picture of perfection
riding the erection"
It is indeed:
"The picture of perfection
riding the erection"
21st Sep 2021 3:11am
Wow.. I love your version my wise poet, and much poetic respect to Eightmore for the inspiration for you to have created such a beautiful receptive masterpiece
1st Oct 2021 1:38pm
The rhyme and flow are awesome and your words fit the picture perfectly. It is always great to get inspired. ;)
