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Maybe I'm Lost
Now where would my broken heart goes...
Will it find its way to home...
Or falls in arms of full of love...
Or get lost in the shadow of light...
That light during night is too dark to find...
For the things we believe,as we wan the most...
I'm hurt and lost...
And snatched from all hopes...
Published 28th Feb 2012
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28th Feb 2012 10:10pm
It was very intense. Check befor posting for grammer and spell check but over all really good poem.
I hope you are proud of this. It's great.
I hope you are proud of this. It's great.
9th Mar 2012 8:29am
1st Mar 2012 10:59am
9th Mar 2012 8:31am
i'm ready brother to do it together and killed it together coz we'r bad boys 4ever lolz
8th Mar 2012 5:40am
you seem as if you speek in a very talk poetic way witch is very hard to do
you cary a rhythem that no one does
you cary a rhythem that no one does
9th Mar 2012 8:32am
thnx so much princess, i really appreciate of wat u said thnx again princess ;)
