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Airspace
The midnight pianos
of old
Arrive
with
That cold
Sadness,
and I laugh,
in musical
Madness -
Into the brash
vast
Darkness,
Phantom
among
phantoms;
I reach
for
my sword
to
Fight,
As
an
Angel
in
Flight
Lands
&
speaks
Time’s
Sands
Over
my
heart
Over
my
lands
With
eternal
demands.
Author's Note
... I think I struggle with depression and stuff like that.
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Re. Airspace
11th Sep 2021 1:13pm
Dear CO,
“ That cold
Sadness,
and I laugh,
in musical
Madness -“ I love the way the rhyming works in this and I love the phrase itself. In the darkest of times there are notes of melodies. The mental images created throughout this poem are really fantastic. I think you’ve used wonderful aspects of heaven and hell (angels and flight, sands over my heart- like the suffocating flames of hell) to depict the aspects of mental depression. And you’ve done this so eloquently. I think there are many of us who can relate to this. Excellent piece. H🌷
“ That cold
Sadness,
and I laugh,
in musical
Madness -“ I love the way the rhyming works in this and I love the phrase itself. In the darkest of times there are notes of melodies. The mental images created throughout this poem are really fantastic. I think you’ve used wonderful aspects of heaven and hell (angels and flight, sands over my heart- like the suffocating flames of hell) to depict the aspects of mental depression. And you’ve done this so eloquently. I think there are many of us who can relate to this. Excellent piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. Airspace
12th Sep 2021 10:10am
Just very wonderful words.
... You are such a beautiful soul H.
I appreciate you very much.
... You are such a beautiful soul H.
I appreciate you very much.
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Re: Re. Airspace
12th Sep 2021 10:14am
[The angelic worlds are both dark and light.]
... I love that R.
(I am very happy that you see a musical quality in the words.)
... I do think that everything first originates in the subconscious mind and that this aspect of the mind is perhaps misunderstood or not attempted to be understood, but is very important to art and the creation of art.
(I am thinking of doing a write to the above quote.)
:)))
Bright blessings R
... I love that R.
(I am very happy that you see a musical quality in the words.)
... I do think that everything first originates in the subconscious mind and that this aspect of the mind is perhaps misunderstood or not attempted to be understood, but is very important to art and the creation of art.
(I am thinking of doing a write to the above quote.)
:)))
Bright blessings R
Re. Airspace
Anonymous
12th Sep 2021 7:09am
Really loved this and agree with the other comments.
I think depression can drive us to deeper creativity. ..... in a way that is carefree, unhindered ....braver.. unrestricted.....
Thanks for sharing.
I think depression can drive us to deeper creativity. ..... in a way that is carefree, unhindered ....braver.. unrestricted.....
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Re. Airspace
12th Sep 2021 10:16am
I think that depression is a most beautiful state in which to create.
Perhaps the best state.
Thank you for your insightful, inspiring perspective Josham.
Perhaps the best state.
Thank you for your insightful, inspiring perspective Josham.
Re. Airspace
12th Sep 2021 9:42am
Yo, this is a truly outstanding ink…very impressed regardless that it’s dark or not 👍🏿✌🏾
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Re: Re. Airspace
12th Sep 2021 10:17am
Re. Airspace
13th Sep 2021 2:40am
The melody of this piece is familiar to me :) I appreciate you sharing this Cipher. I'd ask for another but then I'd be wishing for your downtrodden :/
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Re: Re. Airspace
14th Sep 2021 3:19pm
Thank you Jenny.
... I deeply appreciate you.
(I find great depth of meaning in all of your words.)
... I deeply appreciate you.
(I find great depth of meaning in all of your words.)
Re. Airspace
14th Sep 2021 12:02pm
This is badass too. Very unique style. I enjoy it! I'll be reading more. Solid write man!
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Re: Re. Airspace
14th Sep 2021 3:19pm