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Dreams
I watch the revolutions of the horizon
with an instinctive knowing
that such a thing is an education
in being and growing.
As dawn expands in my heart
and mind, in a design
composed in champaign
and emerges in fully formed art.
In a day scanned by butterfly
wings, over colored petal
things, with an indomitable
will – Integral to a back drop of sky,
Perfectly pristine, baby blue
thing, pulsating behind the
wing shaped mirage where the
butterfly vanished, true -
In a space haze of Heisenberg
uncertainty, certainly
a window to those in the know,
to see where this all will go.
*. *. *
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mrZRURcb1cM
Published 10th Sep 2021
Author's Note
... Inspired by the song Dreams by Fleetwood Mac. (I had been wanting to write this for a while.)
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10th Sep 2021 4:43pm
You capture such a promise of beauty and the lovely possibilities of happiness .... yet cloaked in your gorgeously written imagery, are the makings of something darker.... a storm swirling that awaits...... brewing....
just my thoughts....
Terrific write, C
🌹 - xo
B
just my thoughts....
Terrific write, C
🌹 - xo
B
12th Sep 2021 9:58am
10th Sep 2021 8:00pm
not a F/M song I am familiar with, I clicked on the link no GO, so I will search You tube. I may return!
12th Sep 2021 9:59am
11th Sep 2021 10:56am
Quantum mechanics indeed. The uncertainty of expanding consciousness trapped within prose of such delicacy that the beauty is destroyed attempting to measure it. A challenging poem to grasp with infinite rewards.
12th Sep 2021 10:00am
Thank you Richard. Your conception of the world is beautiful and cool.
I appreciate you.
I appreciate you.
