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No Return
There's no point
in turning back now
It's over
We're through
You broke
All of those promises
You swore were good
I don't understand
Your kind of love
It isn't really love
At least not the kind
That I could ever trust
Why can't you
Just let things be?
in turning back now
It's over
We're through
You broke
All of those promises
You swore were good
I don't understand
Your kind of love
It isn't really love
At least not the kind
That I could ever trust
Why can't you
Just let things be?
Published 8th Sep 2021
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8th Sep 2021 11:59am
Breakups are hard ... even when they go well ... worse when they don't ...
8th Sep 2021 12:10pm
8th Sep 2021 3:04pm
8th Sep 2021 11:20pm
Great poem right to the point. Hope your heart heals and soon. Hugs and peace, (O)
9th Sep 2021 00:19am
Hey Faith…….I feel your sorrowful heart thru every line……I’ve been here……it right down sucks…….I pray you heal quickly and you will always see the beautiful Lady in the mirror…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Sep 2021 4:14am
Dear FM,
Ditto flower girls response. Especially the part about the lovely lady in the mirror. I think this poem is so well formatted and the plain truth of being mistreated is spoken (written) so understandably. Xx
H🌷
Ditto flower girls response. Especially the part about the lovely lady in the mirror. I think this poem is so well formatted and the plain truth of being mistreated is spoken (written) so understandably. Xx
H🌷
10th Sep 2021 1:24pm
Although forgiveness is divine, I think that torturous complacency might be a factor of consideration.
... Tis complex.
Better the monster you know than the one you do not know?
and other considerations such as these.
It would seem there are supports for any possible decision you would want to make.
... I admire the strength of position, of the subject of this piece.
Nicely done.
... Tis complex.
Better the monster you know than the one you do not know?
and other considerations such as these.
It would seem there are supports for any possible decision you would want to make.
... I admire the strength of position, of the subject of this piece.
Nicely done.
23rd Nov 2021 3:04am
When love turns sour and reaches a point of no return ahh. Sad but expressed well. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
