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Haiku 2
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Haiku 2
the moon in glory
lights the twinkle in the snow
a fox softly steps
Written by
jdrury245
(Tav)
Published
28th Feb 2012
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marielavoue
(Gypsy Red)
- Edited 2nd Mar 2012 3:11pm
2nd Mar 2012 3:06pm
Oh yes this one is quite lovely as well. Very nice.
gypsy red
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Re: Haiku 2
Anonymous
9th Apr 2013 00:29am
Exquisite haiku. Love the imagery, the assonance & alliteration in the final lines. Beautifully inked, Tav! :)
Carlene
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silhouettejoy
(Joy)
5th Mar 2014 9:49pm
enjoyed!
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Re: Haiku 2
Anonymous
11th Apr 2014 7:54pm
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jdrury245
(Tav)
22nd Apr 2014 8:00pm
Interested in hearing your constructive criticism?
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23rd Apr 2014 1:55pm
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jdrury245
(Tav)
24th Apr 2014 1:41pm
Actually I am serious... If you are going to say "Perhaps longer poems are your thing" then why? Is it just a subjective comment?
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Anonymous
8th May 2014 6:36pm
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jdrury245
(Tav)
9th May 2014 5:18pm
.......sure.......
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