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TAKE IT YOUR WAY
SURRENDER
Yes, I am
so pleased
to surrender
all, control,
passion, choices,
likes and dislikes,
kisses on secret
places; places that
were once a no, no,
BUT
now a yes, yes.
Train me, please.
YOU
own it all, UP
and DOWNS,
Tell your servant
and he'll say
YES.
Take IT, all
of IT...please
yes right NOW...
Yes, I am
so pleased
to surrender
all, control,
passion, choices,
likes and dislikes,
kisses on secret
places; places that
were once a no, no,
BUT
now a yes, yes.
Train me, please.
YOU
own it all, UP
and DOWNS,
Tell your servant
and he'll say
YES.
Take IT, all
of IT...please
yes right NOW...
Published 2nd Sep 2021
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2nd Sep 2021 7:14am
Has an old school feel in the words all in capitals remind of a hot air balloon or riding on a carousel.
2nd Sep 2021 7:23am
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2021 1:46pm
To be submissive.... mmm... miss it... lovely!! 💜💜
2nd Sep 2021 1:51pm
