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Every aspect of you
is like…
A perfect prism -
[perfectly authentic]
and I am -
a structure of stone,
Below
[the structure of your storm]
Analyze me
in the gaze
of your
Alien eyes
Leave me
dissolved
in
the solve
of your
unsolvable
mystery
never solved
I am
not afraid
to
die
in
a
twinkling
of
Your
Eye
Published 1st Sep 2021
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1st Sep 2021 6:31pm
If her inner self is the source of turmoil,how does peace find a place in her soul?
And would it belong if it could find a place?
And would it belong if it could find a place?
2nd Sep 2021 11:03am
FATBOY
This is such a profound comment!
Thank you so much for sharing this with me, incorporating this energy into my thought process, having a fortifying effect.
This is such a profound comment!
Thank you so much for sharing this with me, incorporating this energy into my thought process, having a fortifying effect.
1st Sep 2021 7:25pm
2nd Sep 2021 11:04am
2nd Sep 2021 11:54am
Excellent write ... there is a vulnerable authenticity in this that resonates ... love the structure and flow ...
2nd Sep 2021 12:02pm
