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Don't Hesitate
Don't hesitate
Never wait
For the right time
To say the right words
To the woman
Of your wants
Your needs
Her hot desires
Are the same
As yours
Her fantasies
Dressed up
In romantic garb
Are not so different
When seen for
What they are
So don't be late
Perhaps, your fate awaits
Never wait
For the right time
To say the right words
To the woman
Of your wants
Your needs
Her hot desires
Are the same
As yours
Her fantasies
Dressed up
In romantic garb
Are not so different
When seen for
What they are
So don't be late
Perhaps, your fate awaits
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Re. Don't Hesitate
26th Aug 2021 1:29pm
That's why I appreciate my woman and my daughter for it is because of them I am still here fighting for my life for I am a firm believer that GOD AIN'T DONE WITH ME 💖🤗👊👍😉🤗
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Re: Re. Don't Hesitate
6th Sep 2021 7:24am
Thank you for your comments. I will include you in my prayers that you recover and be well, my wonderful friend!
Re: Re. Don't Hesitate
6th Sep 2021 4:40pm
Thank you for the support and encouragement for it is people's like you that help people like me continue to move on in their lives never giving up on their lives 👊👍🤗😘 YOU ARE A GODDESS
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Re: Re. Don't Hesitate
7th Sep 2021 7:12am
Thank you. You are most kind. I'm not a goddess, just a friend who cares deeply about what happens to you in your life. My heart goes out to you! I wish there was something I could do to help. Please know that you always have a friend who cares. Hugs, Faith
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8th Sep 2021 1:30am
I appreciate that from you my friend you have been an god send to me for your honor opinion and deepness and respect for good people are hard to come by you don't know how much you change my life for the future 🤗😉😘 just for being apart of life 🦋😊😉👊
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Re. Don't Hesitate
26th Aug 2021 1:39pm
How could one hesitate after such an amazing, unique, and instructive poem? I am full speed ahead. Thanks and hugs, O, xo
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Re: Re. Don't Hesitate
6th Sep 2021 7:26am
Thanks for your comments. Full speed ahead? As always, it's great hearing from you! Have a beautiful and blessed day! XO
Re. Don't Hesitate
26th Aug 2021 6:42pm
Dear FM,
I think this is what they call “man-splaining”. Don’t quote me of course but I think you may have cracked the code in providing menfolk the necessary info for a wonderfully loving and sexy relationship. Standing Ovation.
H🌷
I think this is what they call “man-splaining”. Don’t quote me of course but I think you may have cracked the code in providing menfolk the necessary info for a wonderfully loving and sexy relationship. Standing Ovation.
H🌷
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Re: Re. Don't Hesitate
6th Sep 2021 7:37am
Dear H,
You are so very kind. I almost discarded this poem before anyone would see it feeling that it wasn't quite good enough. I now am happy I didn't because I have gotten such a wonderful response to it. I'm just so hard on myself. I know it's been a little difficult for me getting back in the swing of things on here. But I am having a problem getting much of anything accomplished at the moment. I hope you will forgive me for taking so long to answer your comments. I always love hearing from you!
You are so very kind. I almost discarded this poem before anyone would see it feeling that it wasn't quite good enough. I now am happy I didn't because I have gotten such a wonderful response to it. I'm just so hard on myself. I know it's been a little difficult for me getting back in the swing of things on here. But I am having a problem getting much of anything accomplished at the moment. I hope you will forgive me for taking so long to answer your comments. I always love hearing from you!
Re: Re. Don't Hesitate
6th Sep 2021 9:33am
Dear FM,
You need never worry about a response time table with me, unless we’re going to lunch- then I’ll need immediacy😉. Otherwise, it’s all good. ❤️
H🌷
You need never worry about a response time table with me, unless we’re going to lunch- then I’ll need immediacy😉. Otherwise, it’s all good. ❤️
H🌷
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Re. Don't Hesitate
26th Aug 2021 7:25pm
Reminds me of the ELO song 'Horace Wimp', recalling the chorus line: 'Don't be afraid, just open the door..'
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Re: Re. Don't Hesitate
6th Sep 2021 00:36am
Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. They are deeply appreciated!
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Re. Don't Hesitate
7th Sep 2021 3:52pm
So perfectly captured Faith, how often does someone hesitate to speak and how often do we miss out on something beautiful because of it. Wishing someone would say what is on their mind, it's on ours too. :)
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Re: Re. Don't Hesitate
Thank you so much for your lovely comments. It's so good to hear from you. I'm so sorry to hear about your mother. I will keep you both in my prayers.
Re: Re. Don't Hesitate
8th Sep 2021 10:49am
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. I really appreciate it.