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Love's Grasp- haiku
Love crept cautiously
Like a soul feigning for its
Breath before being snatched
Like a soul feigning for its
Breath before being snatched
Published 22nd Aug 2021
| Edited 2nd Sep 2021
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22nd Aug 2021 11:13pm
23rd Aug 2021 4:19am
Thank you I heavily appreciate your feedback. The last year has been a Rollercoaster for me, but I am still here🙏🏽🙏🏽
23rd Aug 2021 4:37am
23rd Aug 2021 10:22am
Dear LS,
I enjoyed your poem. There was a real sense of speed and surprise for this sometimes crazy emotion called love. And love that’s given then abandoned leaving breathlessness is very difficult. Not sure where I want to go with this which is why your write is so intriguing and well done. H🌷
I enjoyed your poem. There was a real sense of speed and surprise for this sometimes crazy emotion called love. And love that’s given then abandoned leaving breathlessness is very difficult. Not sure where I want to go with this which is why your write is so intriguing and well done. H🌷
23rd Aug 2021 10:28am
23rd Aug 2021 12:32pm
Thank you all for the positive feedback for this short, sweet and to the point piece on love🙏🏽🙏🏽.
23rd Aug 2021 12:46pm
24th Aug 2021 1:48am
2nd Sep 2021 2:28am
