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R.I.P my angel
quando minha avó morreu,
mil pessoas,
Disse mil coisas estúpidas para mim
e tudo que eu queria um deles
para me dar uma razão para não morrer.
(when my grandmother died,
a thousand people said a thousand stupid things to me
and all I wanted one of them to give me was a reason not to die.)
mil pessoas,
Disse mil coisas estúpidas para mim
e tudo que eu queria um deles
para me dar uma razão para não morrer.
(when my grandmother died,
a thousand people said a thousand stupid things to me
and all I wanted one of them to give me was a reason not to die.)
Published 26th Feb 2012
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26th Feb 2012 12:03pm
hold on dear. i lost mine two years ago and i know how it feels like to lose such an important person in your life. Your grandmother wouldn't want you to die, trust me.
Anonymous
26th Feb 2012 2:46pm
Agree with opheliac. Unless they are the devil themselves and are corrupted through and through, all friends and family would want us to live fully and never succumb to sadness and loss. This piece is short and poignant, Gg. Different for you and quite wonderful actually. I like the translated aspect as well. Good to see you writing again, friend. Welcome back.
26th Feb 2012 7:10pm
Thank you's both.. I really didn't want to die. But it felt and still feels like , everyone can say I'm sorry and all these beautiful things to me about her. And to me it was more like thanks for the sympathy, but the only way for me to feel better about her loss was to be with her. And I will one day. Maybe that's when I'll stop missing her. But I'm strong and I know it's a thought to want to see her not a need. I wanna live first lol. But thanks so much for the kind words..
26th Feb 2012 7:11pm
The Portuguese was because its all she spoke . So it was in her memory I wrote it so I did it in both
Anonymous
26th Feb 2012 7:51pm
I understand, and it's a beautiful sentiment, Gg. Well done.
27th Feb 2012 6:22am
Anonymous
25th May 2012 3:59am
. . .is a poem. Unlike my Empty, yours was brilliant. I've added it to my list. Thanks for posting. Sorry I didn't see it sooner, GiGi, but I wasn't quite here yet!
25th May 2012 5:00am
Gigi, I lost my "GG" (Grandmother Grace)
My best friend two years ago and on my
Birthday no less... I miss her each and
Everyday my birthdays no longer have the
Same meaning and never will.... Peace &
Blessings to you always... I feel your pain....
My best friend two years ago and on my
Birthday no less... I miss her each and
Everyday my birthdays no longer have the
Same meaning and never will.... Peace &
Blessings to you always... I feel your pain....
28th May 2012 00:57am
Awe I'm sorry . The worse pain I ever felt was losing her . She died on the day after Christmas which was her favorite holiday. She suffered for two days . We believe she didn't want to ruin our Christmas. But none of the less it still sucks. I feel your pain also . Much love xoxox thanks
