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When you're gone...

I hate myself

....but....but... I love you so much

more

Doesn’t make sense does it?

“You have to love yourself first before you can love someone else”

....right ?

Guess that makes me flawed huh

could never be in a relationship

Cause I abhor myself

......about as much as you hate liars....

But I love you

I just do ...

I miss your presence

When you’re absent

When you’re gone it’s like someone turned off the lights in the middle of a drawing ... at night .

When you’re gone it’s like the power goes out in the middle of a haircut....at night.

When you’re gone it’s like dropping that hotdog that you’ve been longing for for so long , that you just bought with all that you had left on the ground in wet warm sloppy dog 💩... at night .

And when you’re around it’s like

One didn’t drop that hotdog you’ve been longing for

One didn’t get half a haircut cause the power didn’t go out

And one finished that drawing cause you turned the lights back on
Written by Lord_Raven
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