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Silhouette
Her obscure silence
Is the font of empty words
In the spectre of a verse
From the cotton well of mist
Apparition of a kiss
She is silent overseas
In this luminescent dream
Just a silhouette of blue
In the shadow of the moon
Is the font of empty words
In the spectre of a verse
From the cotton well of mist
Apparition of a kiss
She is silent overseas
In this luminescent dream
Just a silhouette of blue
In the shadow of the moon
Author's Note
She's an enigma...
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Re. Silhouette
11th Aug 2021 7:10am
Dear E,
I like the appreciation of this write for something one can’t get a handle on but has feelings for. I admire all the images used to create this charismatic mystery figure. Great piece. H🌷
I like the appreciation of this write for something one can’t get a handle on but has feelings for. I admire all the images used to create this charismatic mystery figure. Great piece. H🌷
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Re. Silhouette
11th Aug 2021 9:12am
Thanks H,
Life is constantly flowing like a river. Some things are unobtainable, even if you desire them.
Thanks for your comments.
Life is constantly flowing like a river. Some things are unobtainable, even if you desire them.
Thanks for your comments.
Re: Re. Silhouette
16th Aug 2021 9:03am
Thanks. I never know how people are going to interpret my poems. I just put them out there.
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16th Aug 2021 9:05am
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19th Aug 2021 8:41am
Re. Silhouette
21st Aug 2021 8:52pm
Hello there.
I almost feel like the last stanza could be a poem in its own right. There’s something beautiful about the little details of pain in this write. It’s heavy on the emotion without using excess faff.
Gorgeous little snippet here. Thank you for sharing.
-M
I almost feel like the last stanza could be a poem in its own right. There’s something beautiful about the little details of pain in this write. It’s heavy on the emotion without using excess faff.
Gorgeous little snippet here. Thank you for sharing.
-M
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Re: Re. Silhouette
21st Aug 2021 9:13pm
Hello
It's interesting to read your interpretation. I think there was a little pain and emotion in there. Trying to reach out to something beyond my grasp.
Thanks for reading.
It's interesting to read your interpretation. I think there was a little pain and emotion in there. Trying to reach out to something beyond my grasp.
Thanks for reading.
Re. Silhouette
13th Sep 2021 10:02am
Again, word choice, style, and the mood you set make it good. Another solid pen!
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Re. Silhouette
27th Oct 2021 11:31pm
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28th Oct 2021 00:03am