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Heart-shaped Stones
She keeps an eye on the beach
scanning around near her feet
trying to find heart-shaped stones
She wants the ones with a hole
from years of erosion
like the heart that she owns
Her search will never end
having gave up on love
what's left will just be bones
scanning around near her feet
trying to find heart-shaped stones
She wants the ones with a hole
from years of erosion
like the heart that she owns
Her search will never end
having gave up on love
what's left will just be bones
Published 9th Aug 2021
Author's Note
By Pent
Aug 8th, 2021
Aug 8th, 2021
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9th Aug 2021 3:53am
Dear MS,
I appreciated the tenacity of the heroine in this poem. The disappointment in a relationship can be redirected in a project that seems futile and you’ve captured this so well in the write. The picture is equally great and supports the poem wonderfully. H🌷
I appreciated the tenacity of the heroine in this poem. The disappointment in a relationship can be redirected in a project that seems futile and you’ve captured this so well in the write. The picture is equally great and supports the poem wonderfully. H🌷
10th Aug 2021 2:31am
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