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The Dotted Line
Human behavior, in a purveyance
Of self generated,
self perpetuated,
Patterns.
Such a curious spectacle.
Social scripts and transcripts.
Clinging glasses & loud voices.
You want existence, this is it.
Who will you be? Such choices.
Why do we do what we do?
I do it because I love it.
What is love?
I do it because it seems like
the thing to do.
I do it because I am driven.
Seeming meaning meeting
this mind -
designer in it’s design.
Schemas of socialization
most of the
time.
Why can I not just
capitulate
&
sign
my name
on
the
dotted
Line?
Published 8th Aug 2021
Author's Note
Sometimes I feel like the things I want to do are things that most would not even consider doing.
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9th Aug 2021 12:18pm
Such profound and deeply appreciated words my most elevated & wise friend.
Much love.
:)))
Much love.
:)))
8th Aug 2021 1:36pm
To thine own self be true
Lions
Tigers
Jaguars
Leopards
All big, deadly cats
All of them protect that which is important to them
But only Lions roam in family groups
Yet all of them thrive, majestically
Lions
Tigers
Jaguars
Leopards
All big, deadly cats
All of them protect that which is important to them
But only Lions roam in family groups
Yet all of them thrive, majestically
9th Aug 2021 12:18pm
Very deep words that I appreciate greatly and shall meditate upon.
Thank you Fatboy.
Thank you Fatboy.
9th Aug 2021 1:24am
this is really great write dearest Cipher
I would so love the instructions that I think
must have came with me...
I have so many of the same thoughts...
wonderfully written...
I would so love the instructions that I think
must have came with me...
I have so many of the same thoughts...
wonderfully written...
9th Aug 2021 12:19pm
9th Aug 2021 4:44am
Dear CO,
I can’t help but wonder, if the things you want to do aren’t harmful to you or another, what prevents you? For me it’s fear. It’s isolating and debilitating. After reading your thoughtful poem it made me wonder what holds back others from soaring to the stars? Fantastically introspective write! H🌷
I can’t help but wonder, if the things you want to do aren’t harmful to you or another, what prevents you? For me it’s fear. It’s isolating and debilitating. After reading your thoughtful poem it made me wonder what holds back others from soaring to the stars? Fantastically introspective write! H🌷
9th Aug 2021 12:21pm
Oh... That is so profound H!
I love this comment.
Gives me much to think about...
You are awesome & amazing.
I love this comment.
Gives me much to think about...
You are awesome & amazing.
