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Off the Bone
Offered plate of ribs
a saucy girl
takes one
Eve
a saucy girl
takes one
Eve
Published 5th Aug 2021
Author's Note
Written for a competition
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2021 00:48am
Oooh!
Love this...
So much here!
Love this...
So much here!
6th Aug 2021 6:51am
Mark_Parsons,
Thanks for the read and sharing the love. Glad you were able to read the whole story.
down2dirt
Thanks for the read and sharing the love. Glad you were able to read the whole story.
down2dirt
Anonymous
6th Aug 2021 2:46am
Hey DD…..very powerful lines…….reminds of a song Kenny Chesney sings……”I Want My Ribs Back”…….good write…….purple luv & hugs xo :)
6th Aug 2021 6:53am
flowergirl,
Thanks for the read. I’ll have to check out KC’s rib song. Stay powerful!
down2dirt
Thanks for the read. I’ll have to check out KC’s rib song. Stay powerful!
down2dirt
Dear D,
Clever. Like the biblical reference. I wish you the best for the comp. very witty write. H🌷
Clever. Like the biblical reference. I wish you the best for the comp. very witty write. H🌷
6th Aug 2021 6:56am
Honoria,
Thanks for the read. Happy to throw in a reference ever now and then.
down2dirt
Thanks for the read. Happy to throw in a reference ever now and then.
down2dirt
