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Revolution
We need a revolution
something to bind us together
The American Revolution did that
But we weren't there to remember
We need to have a cause
something to fight for
These people aren't even trying
anymore
something to bind us together
The American Revolution did that
But we weren't there to remember
We need to have a cause
something to fight for
These people aren't even trying
anymore
Published 25th Feb 2012
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25th Feb 2012 1:33am
I like te message behind this "but we weren't there to remember"
I feel a few more lines would add more effect?
But then, you got your point across well so good one hun
I feel a few more lines would add more effect?
But then, you got your point across well so good one hun
25th Feb 2012 1:58am
Yeah I was debating whether to add more, but a secondopinion said i should keep it this way
25th Feb 2012 2:43am
25th Feb 2012 1:58pm
your words really touched my heart & mind
the separation between us was by design
the media wont let the tension die
& our 1st black leader...they wont even let him try
to do good for us all
but they want only the rich to be able to ball
& the seperation between rich & poor
is more detrimental than racism & i dont think i need to say any more....
the separation between us was by design
the media wont let the tension die
& our 1st black leader...they wont even let him try
to do good for us all
but they want only the rich to be able to ball
& the seperation between rich & poor
is more detrimental than racism & i dont think i need to say any more....
