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Saturday morning
... ...
Dawn arrives
Carrying the enchanted Friday night
Saturday morning
The angels of hope building balconies
And a hurricane of windows
The city comes alive
The weekend has nothing else on my résumé
The concrete jungle
Multifaceted and calm
Like a thinker without ghosts
My man-made environment...
And its increasing helpfulness
Entertaining spirit and... flesh
... ...
Dawn arrives
Carrying the enchanted Friday night
Saturday morning
The angels of hope building balconies
And a hurricane of windows
The city comes alive
The weekend has nothing else on my résumé
The concrete jungle
Multifaceted and calm
Like a thinker without ghosts
My man-made environment...
And its increasing helpfulness
Entertaining spirit and... flesh
... ...
Published 24th Jul 2021
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24th Jul 2021 3:47pm
24th Jul 2021 4:07pm
25th Jul 2021 4:43am
Dear M,
I like the optimistic POV of a new day with new hope and adventures in your poem. I also enjoyed the style, for me, it read similar to a Mickey Spillane novel. Film noir-esque. Very cool. H🌷
I like the optimistic POV of a new day with new hope and adventures in your poem. I also enjoyed the style, for me, it read similar to a Mickey Spillane novel. Film noir-esque. Very cool. H🌷
