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I KNOW
You CONSTANTLY under estimate my brilliance
As much as you do my resilience
FACT: YOUR'RE one in a million
A prize yes acting all reptilian
Your scaly skin is used to harshness
Your heart is filled with absolute darkness
You creep and crawl to find me weak
Claiming love but its my downfall you seek
To stand in shame with a bloodshot face
To make me kneel in total disgrace
The eggs you lay brings forth lies
And as you slither in disguise
Please be advised
I may look foolish as I am wise
As the lives I have lived made me immune
And because I am dancing to your tune
Does not mean that I don't know what's up
As much as you do my resilience
FACT: YOUR'RE one in a million
A prize yes acting all reptilian
Your scaly skin is used to harshness
Your heart is filled with absolute darkness
You creep and crawl to find me weak
Claiming love but its my downfall you seek
To stand in shame with a bloodshot face
To make me kneel in total disgrace
The eggs you lay brings forth lies
And as you slither in disguise
Please be advised
I may look foolish as I am wise
As the lives I have lived made me immune
And because I am dancing to your tune
Does not mean that I don't know what's up
Author's Note
SIXTH SENSE
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Re. I KNOW
22nd Jul 2021 7:44pm
Re. I KNOW
22nd Jul 2021 7:51pm
There just may not be any love on either side there. If they under estimates someone that they supposedly loves, then where is the love. If you think that individual is but one fruit in any orchard, well. This is a tight piece of the conflicts of love or at least a relationship. Tight work Lady
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Re: Re. I KNOW
22nd Jul 2021 7:52pm
VERY MUCH APPRECIATED SPLICE... SOMETIMES YOU JUST HAVE TO SUCK IT UP I GUESS
Re: Re. I KNOW
22nd Jul 2021 8:27pm
Hahaha among other things. Please don't mind us mind is always in the gutter
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22nd Jul 2021 8:29pm
Re. I KNOW
22nd Jul 2021 9:40pm
Powerfull and direct. I like this one. Great flow too. Thanks for sharing
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Re. I KNOW
23rd Jul 2021 1:37am
Can you dance to my tune one day? Sounds intriguing. It's not though, is it?
It's just you going along with what they want, lol.
It's just you going along with what they want, lol.
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23rd Jul 2021 1:41am
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23rd Jul 2021 8:00pm
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6th Aug 2021 3:15pm
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2021 9:04am
the game of broken hearts...
a creepy crawly slithering scaly thing...wow...
enjoyed!
a creepy crawly slithering scaly thing...wow...
enjoyed!
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Re. I KNOW
10th Aug 2021 5:52pm
Give them enough rope and they will hang themselves. While hanging a cauldron of boiling water needs to placed beneath them so when almost dead release them into another torture. Lol.
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