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What a surprise
... ... ... ...
What a surprise
Fancy seeing you here
I can't believe it
I balance verses that make sense...
... with some that do not
I think I've forgotten you before
Our relationship is still a happy and healthy one
How come she loves having an episode of deja vu?
Let's use nonsense as an occasional romance
Sometimes a flash of humor becomes delightful
A variant of the nightlife
What else would a man expect on a date
An appealing woman wondering what I am thinking
Maybe a supernatural incident trigger our sex craving
You know all couples get bored eventually
... ... ... ...
What a surprise
Fancy seeing you here
I can't believe it
I balance verses that make sense...
... with some that do not
I think I've forgotten you before
Our relationship is still a happy and healthy one
How come she loves having an episode of deja vu?
Let's use nonsense as an occasional romance
Sometimes a flash of humor becomes delightful
A variant of the nightlife
What else would a man expect on a date
An appealing woman wondering what I am thinking
Maybe a supernatural incident trigger our sex craving
You know all couples get bored eventually
... ... ... ...
Published 22nd Jul 2021
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Anonymous
22nd Jul 2021 4:00am
i thought i read
I balance versus that makes sense...
... with some that do not
I balance versus that makes sense...
... with some that do not
"... I balance verses (or stanzas) that make sense...
... with some that do not ..."
What is the theme of what we talk about when we talk about love?
The things we do for love?
It looks like a first date.
The couple is interested in combating boredom in their a relationship
... ...
Thank you for your comment and for adding this poem to your reading list.
... with some that do not ..."
What is the theme of what we talk about when we talk about love?
The things we do for love?
It looks like a first date.
The couple is interested in combating boredom in their a relationship
... ...
Thank you for your comment and for adding this poem to your reading list.
Anonymous
23rd Jul 2021 2:45am
I balance versus "that makes sense..."
With some [things] that do not
I guess this is the first glyph that came into my head upon reading
The reader following the speaker as the speaker presents themselves or at least their words [before the reader] as a representation of their own [non-syntactical] inner-stream of consciousnesses.
Do you date often, Mister Marks?
With some [things] that do not
I guess this is the first glyph that came into my head upon reading
The reader following the speaker as the speaker presents themselves or at least their words [before the reader] as a representation of their own [non-syntactical] inner-stream of consciousnesses.
Do you date often, Mister Marks?
23rd Jul 2021 9:07pm
Not often... Scarcely ever ... Almost never ...
I've forgotten about dating... I´m old.
I've forgotten how to date.
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Thank you for your comment, Emi-ly.
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I've forgotten about dating... I´m old.
I've forgotten how to date.
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Thank you for your comment, Emi-ly.
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