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Bottle Magic
Mandarin sun
mingles with the sea,
bikini clad babes having fun,
sand castles worn away,
on the shores,
where the sea becomes foamy,
and
frothy.
Pearl white,
coming in, just right,
in a glisten & a gleam, and explosion of sight,
Surfacing a sheen,
an opacity in verdigris, seen
at the ending of a wayward sun beam
Beginning
A communication
between
One being & another being,
Messaging
Only for the lonely
Seeking
Seeing
Something
from
Somewhere
out
There
Published 21st Jul 2021
Author's Note
I have actually found a message in a bottle, on the shores of Lake Michigan... And yes... I did sing the song... Laughing & smiling... It made me very happy... but yes... This piece is about making requests (spoken or unspoken) to the universe... Oh... And what dreams may come. Sometimes, perhaps.
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22nd Jul 2021 6:29am
It's magic, reminds of a poem called sent on the Sun but it landed on the moon....
The communication between two beings in this format is very beautiful
Great ink
The communication between two beings in this format is very beautiful
Great ink
22nd Jul 2021 8:36am
