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2D World
some days I feel so far away
because no one hears silent screams
so detached from my mind
i’ll accept with time
there's no place for me
I feel so real, yet so fake
no one finds the time to think
about my feelings, about my past
but then again, that's how I act
one day I’ll be so all alone
and I’ll be secluded in my 2D world
no one to help me or save me
just an empty space to call my own
I'm phony when I’m happy
and I am real when I’m mad
the things that build me ultimately break me
something that I don’t understand
when I’m in love, I’m invincible
when I'm not, I'm broken
can't seem to keep anyone close
sometimes everything's a lose to me
one day I’ll be so all alone
and I’ll be secluded in my 2D world
no one to help me or save me
just an empty space to call my own
maybe I should find a way out
and face the facts
I’m better off floating away in this void
or at least away from people
I'm just not good with goodbyes
my issues run strong, but I hold on
and I do, and I do!!!
because no one hears silent screams
so detached from my mind
i’ll accept with time
there's no place for me
I feel so real, yet so fake
no one finds the time to think
about my feelings, about my past
but then again, that's how I act
one day I’ll be so all alone
and I’ll be secluded in my 2D world
no one to help me or save me
just an empty space to call my own
I'm phony when I’m happy
and I am real when I’m mad
the things that build me ultimately break me
something that I don’t understand
when I’m in love, I’m invincible
when I'm not, I'm broken
can't seem to keep anyone close
sometimes everything's a lose to me
one day I’ll be so all alone
and I’ll be secluded in my 2D world
no one to help me or save me
just an empty space to call my own
maybe I should find a way out
and face the facts
I’m better off floating away in this void
or at least away from people
I'm just not good with goodbyes
my issues run strong, but I hold on
and I do, and I do!!!
Published 18th Jul 2021
Author's Note
A older poem I wrote in my younger years.
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18th Jul 2021 7:13am
And yet despite being older, it's still crazy relatable.... There's parts that hooked me, immediately.... some feelings lessen with time and some I think we just learn how to live with...
I enjoyed your poetic voice, DC...
Thanks for sharing.
🌹 - B
I enjoyed your poetic voice, DC...
Thanks for sharing.
🌹 - B
18th Jul 2021 7:20am
Well everything is tragic when you're younger haha. I was going through a few years of bad depression. I think once I started letting go of things and accepting the small moments, life got better. Not to say life doesn't always have it's problems, but like you said it lessens.
Thank you for the read, friend 😁
Thank you for the read, friend 😁
18th Jul 2021 12:41pm
