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Mesmerized

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I often think that the night is more alive and more richly colored than the day.
Vincent Van Gogh
Vincent Van Gogh
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Re: Re. Mesmerized
16th Jul 2021 1:49am
Aww.. thank you my love for the engaging praise with an exclamation mark.. which is alway the crème of the crop with me.. wink, in addition, for taking the time to grace my canvas..
Enjoy the reminder of your evening as it slowly fades into a wonderful awaiting Friday on the horizon
Enjoy the reminder of your evening as it slowly fades into a wonderful awaiting Friday on the horizon
Re. Mesmerized
14th Jul 2021 4:58am
I have mesmerized by you my sweet. I'm in tuned with spiritual side. Keep on writing my Erotic Queen of Love.
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Re: Re. Mesmerized
16th Jul 2021 2:20am
This Queen bows to you my handsome poet for the acknowledgment and the accolade. And in best regards, I thank you for reading
Have a great evening and a better tomorrow in all you do and all you say
Have a great evening and a better tomorrow in all you do and all you say
Re: Re. Mesmerized
16th Jul 2021 11:25pm
Re. Mesmerized
Anonymous
14th Jul 2021 5:31am
the mixing of chi, the essence from within..

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Re: Re. Mesmerized
16th Jul 2021 2:30am
Words of the wise my poet and taken in its marvelous regality, I thank you for reading and scribbling a comment upon my canvas
It is late therefore, I wish you a grand evening and a prosperous Friday to relish in
It is late therefore, I wish you a grand evening and a prosperous Friday to relish in
Re. Mesmerized
14th Jul 2021 6:18am
Re: Re. Mesmerized
16th Jul 2021 2:07am
You sure do know how to make a poetess blush my wise poet.. thank you for taking the required time to read and I bow to your comment in merit
Happy Friday to you as you enjoy this day and please enjoy it as it gladly unfolds in all its splendid glory
Happy Friday to you as you enjoy this day and please enjoy it as it gladly unfolds in all its splendid glory
Re: Re. Mesmerized
Favourite verse, after rereading, for sensuous touchy-feeliness (makes me want to try it out with someone):
The sweetest recipient of the supremacy you have awoken
Hands as gentle as a wisp softly engulfing me
Tenderly bathing my skin with wisdom found
within the power of your touch.
The sweetest recipient of the supremacy you have awoken
Hands as gentle as a wisp softly engulfing me
Tenderly bathing my skin with wisdom found
within the power of your touch.
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Re. Mesmerized
14th Jul 2021 5:16pm
Re: Re. Mesmerized
16th Jul 2021 2:03am
Aww.. I must thank you my friend for such a charitable praise to take comfort in and that goes double for reading..
Have a blessed evening and a great Friday in your daily duties
Have a blessed evening and a great Friday in your daily duties
Re: Re. Mesmerized
16th Jul 2021 3:07am
Re: Re. Mesmerized
16th Jul 2021 3:08am