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Oh sweet Angel
Oh sweet Angel,
What have you done?
You crawl away
And hide your gun.
You shut the door
And lock your spirit.
I question your heart
And the hatred within it.
Tell me now,
The desire didn’t speak?
Or did discipline fail
And devastation wreak?
What have you done?
You crawl away
And hide your gun.
You shut the door
And lock your spirit.
I question your heart
And the hatred within it.
Tell me now,
The desire didn’t speak?
Or did discipline fail
And devastation wreak?
Published 23rd Feb 2012
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24th Feb 2012 00:01am
24th Feb 2012 00:02am
Anonymous
24th Feb 2012 1:28pm
I admire your ability to write such wonderful short poetry!!!!!
24th Feb 2012 5:27pm
thank you very much!!!!! what a lovely compliment- but long ones I end up kinda ramblin or digressin so short ones r definately for me lol!!!!!!!!!!
24th Feb 2012 9:35pm
dont know how to describe it but love it
its sweet,beautiful and outspoken i wud say!!!
its sweet,beautiful and outspoken i wud say!!!
24th Feb 2012 9:38pm
25th Feb 2012 3:05pm
insanity inspired by pure desire
but the passion seems to have no fire
& even the strongest of us is subject to fall
the burden of uncertainty is perhaps the heaviest of all....
but the passion seems to have no fire
& even the strongest of us is subject to fall
the burden of uncertainty is perhaps the heaviest of all....
25th Feb 2012 3:36pm
Anonymous
25th Feb 2012 4:23pm
a awesome poem short and to the point a wonderful poem good job
25th Feb 2012 4:31pm
thank you!!!!!! its one o my most recent ones, most on here i wrote a few years back lol!!!!!!!!!
