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...To Dream of Fireworks...
My barefoot stepped out into the sand.
A radiant night in a star spangled land.
I instinctually reach out and meet your hand.
Our pulses mingle in a harmonized connection.
Under a vault of stars as our only protection.
Out in the vast, overhanging, oculus open.
You make me stronger and better -
As we walk step for step, together.
Outside the crowd that assembled -
In electric sky reflections, preambled.
There is a cove in the afars that pulsates like a breeze.
We walk, like explorers, to a new world.
I have told you the secrets of being hurled -
In and out of an abyss, as a fervent wish
Of acceptance and you didn’t bat an eye lash.
You have accepted me for me and I now believe.
We find a divot in a shadow, a place to be.
Recreated within one another, who we are -
We now explore, finding who we were always meant to be.
I pull you close, embrace you, and pull you closer.
The firework display begins to play in the sky.
I see a strobing light upon your face, in the corner of my eye.
Turning to see the illumination of your physiognomy.
Shadows placed, paced, replaced – With firework lights from the sky.
The fireworks upon your face is all that I want to see.
I watch the revolution of lights merge into the finale.
O how the shadows dance in the sinuousities of romance -
In my transfixed perception, held captive in this
Vision of a visage, melded into a fully alive shadowy happenstance -
Perchance to dream of the look on your heavenesque face
As you turn to me and our lips meet in the vibration of a supernal kiss...
Published 9th Jul 2021
Author's Note
I thought about writing something about the fireworks and this is what came of that.
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Wow what a lovely sensitive poem you’ve written here C. I have only ever loved A love poem once before. It was actually written here at the site btw, this poem right here just might take its place. Absolutely gorgeous this piece. Just wow i am humbled by this beauty. And whomever you speak of I am sure will love this for the rest of their life.
Write on Cipher
Listed 👍🏻💚🤗🌈
Your sister in ink
Jackie XX
Write on Cipher
Listed 👍🏻💚🤗🌈
Your sister in ink
Jackie XX
10th Jul 2021 12:29pm
Thank you Zazzles. I am humbled and deeply appreciative of your sentiments.
(I was thinking of turning this into a trilogy?.. Like... The smoke of a firework becomes a portal, into the next episode... And take it from there... And maybe do a recording? Beginning Middle End?.. Your comments are so very encouraging.)
btw. I have been really thinking about your story. (A time traveling witch). that is such a cool idea...
(I was thinking of turning this into a trilogy?.. Like... The smoke of a firework becomes a portal, into the next episode... And take it from there... And maybe do a recording? Beginning Middle End?.. Your comments are so very encouraging.)
btw. I have been really thinking about your story. (A time traveling witch). that is such a cool idea...
Yes, this poem is just simply beautiful♥️
I think any time there is a chance to pull a trilogy out of a piece go for it! I’m a funny writer. I have to strike when the iron is hot, if someone interrupts me or asked me a question and I lose my train of thought sometimes it could be lost forever Eeek!
As far as my story goes, I’ve already posted the second page and what I’m thinking is, because we’re going to travel back to Salem 17th century there could be so many things going on there.
Oh yeah my mind is just buzzing lol you are definitely in the crew!
I think the reason that we’re looking for the time charm is to reverse what happened in the 17th Century witch trials. It’s one thing to be able to apparat from one place to another it’s entirely another thing to change time in itself ! Super excited to see what mishap adventures awaits
Big hugs
Jackie xoxox
I think any time there is a chance to pull a trilogy out of a piece go for it! I’m a funny writer. I have to strike when the iron is hot, if someone interrupts me or asked me a question and I lose my train of thought sometimes it could be lost forever Eeek!
As far as my story goes, I’ve already posted the second page and what I’m thinking is, because we’re going to travel back to Salem 17th century there could be so many things going on there.
Oh yeah my mind is just buzzing lol you are definitely in the crew!
I think the reason that we’re looking for the time charm is to reverse what happened in the 17th Century witch trials. It’s one thing to be able to apparat from one place to another it’s entirely another thing to change time in itself ! Super excited to see what mishap adventures awaits
Big hugs
Jackie xoxox
10th Jul 2021 11:13pm
I fell asleep for a few hours today, and I had this strange dream of a full blown post, here on DUP, and I wanted to retrieve it and bring it back into the DUP in this parallel universe, however, I was too deeply engaged in the dream world, and I knew this to be true, as a conscious member of the dream realm, so I just basked in the energy of the words, as much as I could, knowing that I would not remember the words when I awoke.
Eeek! is right...
Yes... Holding the train of thought is like a Jedi mind trick...
I LOVE YOUR IDEA.
Yes... That was the central question in my mind, as is the case with time travel as a concept; to change or not to change?
My imagination really runs wild to think of how the world might be, were there no Salem Witch Trials... I know that knowledge has always found a way to survive, in some form, but it is tragic how much has been destroyed by totalitarian dogmatists...
I had an idea for a write last night, I think, about the Mahabharata... and how there are hundreds of thousands of Sanskrit manuscripts with some deep deep knowledge, and how that knowledge is no longer in the pool of human knowledge, or, what I call... Google knowledge.... and how we must perhaps, as poets/writers/thinkers/practitioners obtain this knowledge through the Akashic record...
Rambling aside, I imagine a world where that knowledge was not lost, in the way that it was...
... My mind is buzzing with this idea, also... I look forward to see where you go with this...
Eeek! is right...
Yes... Holding the train of thought is like a Jedi mind trick...
I LOVE YOUR IDEA.
Yes... That was the central question in my mind, as is the case with time travel as a concept; to change or not to change?
My imagination really runs wild to think of how the world might be, were there no Salem Witch Trials... I know that knowledge has always found a way to survive, in some form, but it is tragic how much has been destroyed by totalitarian dogmatists...
I had an idea for a write last night, I think, about the Mahabharata... and how there are hundreds of thousands of Sanskrit manuscripts with some deep deep knowledge, and how that knowledge is no longer in the pool of human knowledge, or, what I call... Google knowledge.... and how we must perhaps, as poets/writers/thinkers/practitioners obtain this knowledge through the Akashic record...
Rambling aside, I imagine a world where that knowledge was not lost, in the way that it was...
... My mind is buzzing with this idea, also... I look forward to see where you go with this...
