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Born to be Un(born)
Unpaired lives paired in Death
like matchstick and candle wick.
Deflected particles approbated in the reflected light
)For i was born not to born again(
won't not carry forward today to tomorrow
and march with the crowd with
lamenting lamps in their mortal hands.
A thirst that grows with each drink
inverse to its inherent nature
For meditation is the poetry
and
poetry is the meditation
An Exception from the Inception
formed by Perception,Deception and Reception.
like matchstick and candle wick.
Deflected particles approbated in the reflected light
)For i was born not to born again(
won't not carry forward today to tomorrow
and march with the crowd with
lamenting lamps in their mortal hands.
A thirst that grows with each drink
inverse to its inherent nature
For meditation is the poetry
and
poetry is the meditation
An Exception from the Inception
formed by Perception,Deception and Reception.
Published 23rd Feb 2012
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23rd Feb 2012 2:49pm
Rakhy, (is this your first name?)
I like very much this poem
"...won't not carry forward today to tomorrow
and march with the crowd with
lamenting lamps in their mortal hands.
A thirst that grows with each drink..."
This part is so great and sooo deep.
It remaind me a Seneca's phrase:
"... Have a hurry to live
treats every day like a lifetime
those who make hope a reason for living
leave to escape the present
and with the yearn for survival
succeed in them
the fear for death..."
"For meditation is the poetry"
I hope to get one of the point of your writing.
It does not matter if I have not succeeded, thanks for making me ponder.
I like very much this poem
"...won't not carry forward today to tomorrow
and march with the crowd with
lamenting lamps in their mortal hands.
A thirst that grows with each drink..."
This part is so great and sooo deep.
It remaind me a Seneca's phrase:
"... Have a hurry to live
treats every day like a lifetime
those who make hope a reason for living
leave to escape the present
and with the yearn for survival
succeed in them
the fear for death..."
"For meditation is the poetry"
I hope to get one of the point of your writing.
It does not matter if I have not succeeded, thanks for making me ponder.
Yeah Rakhi is my first name.
You made me learn more about my verses with those enlightened ones Thank you so much :).
[The delayed departures carries the burden forgoing the present]
*Always happy to see here=)*.
You made me learn more about my verses with those enlightened ones Thank you so much :).
[The delayed departures carries the burden forgoing the present]
*Always happy to see here=)*.
24th Feb 2012 10:22am
i feel very bad for not reading your poetry earlier. I've always fancied your postings in threads but never read anything apart from that.
This poem is fantastic. Philosophical and very well written; just how i like it!
This poem is fantastic. Philosophical and very well written; just how i like it!
Fancied wow!thank you so much for your presence Ohpy.It made me happy indeed.
