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Re. The Sea of Trees
26th Jun 2021 9:44pm
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28th Jun 2021 00:23am
Re. The Sea of Trees
27th Jun 2021 3:26am
Dear U,
Yes, some days it does seem easier to lay down and call it quits. I can appreciate this concept on so many levels.
Poetically I love the image of a sea of trees. It feels inviting and as your reader reads on I love the twist of moving forward and into the cold. Difficult topic very well written. H🌷
Yes, some days it does seem easier to lay down and call it quits. I can appreciate this concept on so many levels.
Poetically I love the image of a sea of trees. It feels inviting and as your reader reads on I love the twist of moving forward and into the cold. Difficult topic very well written. H🌷
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Re: Re. The Sea of Trees
28th Jun 2021 00:24am
thank you for your comment, H. Such a difficult topic and exceptionally important one.
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Re: Re. The Sea of Trees
3rd Jul 2021 5:04pm
Ethan, thank you for your detailed comment. I appreciate the care that you have taken here, appreciate your references, and viewpoints here, much of which resonates with me. Poem is inspired by the Aokigahara in Japan, also knows as 'The Sea of Trees', also known as 'Suicide Forest' as individuals find their way there to leave this planet in their own way. Remaining as close to nature, eventually returning, is a strong force in my world.
In particular touched by your details, coming from a strong poet, such as yourself.
Hope that you're having a great weekend.
I appreciate you,
ursa 💜
In particular touched by your details, coming from a strong poet, such as yourself.
Hope that you're having a great weekend.
I appreciate you,
ursa 💜
Re. The Sea of Trees
4th Jul 2021 1:33pm
dear Ursa
interesting juxtapositional realms
Aokigahara and lullaby
i look forward to becoming acquainted with your inkwell
a warm smile
silent lotus
interesting juxtapositional realms
Aokigahara and lullaby
i look forward to becoming acquainted with your inkwell
a warm smile
silent lotus
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Re: Re. The Sea of Trees
5th Jul 2021 00:51am
Hello Silent Lotus,
Thank you for stopping by, and for your comment. Sincerely appreciate this. warmly, ursa 💜
Thank you for stopping by, and for your comment. Sincerely appreciate this. warmly, ursa 💜
Re. The Sea of Trees
"like a fossil tree
whence we gather no flowers
sad has been my life
fated no fruit to produce
earthen taste of life's last breath"
(death Tanka composed by Minamoto Yorimasa, immediately before his act of seppuku in the Byodo-in temple of Uji)
Stunning, Ursa ⛩️
By virtue of your words' ethereally gentle solace, one's spirit is swept into your ambient moment's peaceful countenance ⁓ soft as a faint whisper into the ear of a tranquil, subsiding heart.
I think I've just heard your soul's most beguilingly personal soft breath.
Thank you for sharing You, Lady Ursa ⁓ Richard 🍃
whence we gather no flowers
sad has been my life
fated no fruit to produce
earthen taste of life's last breath"
(death Tanka composed by Minamoto Yorimasa, immediately before his act of seppuku in the Byodo-in temple of Uji)
Stunning, Ursa ⛩️
By virtue of your words' ethereally gentle solace, one's spirit is swept into your ambient moment's peaceful countenance ⁓ soft as a faint whisper into the ear of a tranquil, subsiding heart.
I think I've just heard your soul's most beguilingly personal soft breath.
Thank you for sharing You, Lady Ursa ⁓ Richard 🍃
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