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Fainting episodes
The room was still but my head was spinning,
My mind and heart were racing and my heart was winning.
As the world went black it was like I didn’t exist,
I saw nothing, felt nothing and the thoughts no longer persisted.
I cant remember what happened to me after the world went dark and my mind went blank,
It was as if I were on a pirates ship and walked the plank.
Down into the depths of the ocean,
I wonder what my body looked like without a single motion.
My mind and heart were racing and my heart was winning.
As the world went black it was like I didn’t exist,
I saw nothing, felt nothing and the thoughts no longer persisted.
I cant remember what happened to me after the world went dark and my mind went blank,
It was as if I were on a pirates ship and walked the plank.
Down into the depths of the ocean,
I wonder what my body looked like without a single motion.
Published 25th Jun 2021
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25th Jun 2021 4:22am
Dear M,
This write has me feeling very claustrophobic. You explained this type of experience with such detailed accuracy, how scary it must have been.
“ I saw nothing, felt nothing and the thoughts no longer persisted.” I’m taking this out of context but I have to say, today…I really relish the idea of this concept. As per my friend, your poem captures, such raw reality moments that we all share and can understand. H🌷
This write has me feeling very claustrophobic. You explained this type of experience with such detailed accuracy, how scary it must have been.
“ I saw nothing, felt nothing and the thoughts no longer persisted.” I’m taking this out of context but I have to say, today…I really relish the idea of this concept. As per my friend, your poem captures, such raw reality moments that we all share and can understand. H🌷
25th Jun 2021 2:40pm
Thank you so much H! You always remind me how truly special the gift I have with poetry is! You remind me of one of the reasons that I write. Which is to relate to, help and or inspire my readers.
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25th Jun 2021 8:52am
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25th Jun 2021 2:40pm
25th Jun 2021 8:58am
Reminds me of Disassociation.
An anxiety response.
“The room was still but my head was spinning,
My mind and heart were racing and my heart was winning.”
Your heart won the race in a room that set *stillness as it’s pace.
An anxiety response.
“The room was still but my head was spinning,
My mind and heart were racing and my heart was winning.”
Your heart won the race in a room that set *stillness as it’s pace.
25th Jun 2021 2:41pm
