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Dance with me
wake up
it is time to rise
to stand on the knife edge
cleaving chaos into life
one side falling into darkness
the other becoming light
do you fear the knife edge
or do you dance
dance with me
to the music of the stars
if you miss your step
if you fall
I will fall with you
and together with our scars
we will live in the light
our passion becoming prayer
to change reality
with the power of our dreaming
it is time to rise
to stand on the knife edge
cleaving chaos into life
one side falling into darkness
the other becoming light
do you fear the knife edge
or do you dance
dance with me
to the music of the stars
if you miss your step
if you fall
I will fall with you
and together with our scars
we will live in the light
our passion becoming prayer
to change reality
with the power of our dreaming
Published 24th Jun 2021
| Edited 15th Dec 2022
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24th Jun 2021 9:41pm
24th Jun 2021 10:19pm
You are wonderful and kind, this poem grew from a line you wrote "a day made for plunder". Care to dance?
25th Jun 2021 2:07am
Dear sorceress, you invented the dance steps I move my feet to but yes, it would be my pleasure to step on your toes as we dance.
25th Jun 2021 8:27pm
Amazing! I felt a sincerity in your words so much that I almost got caught up as if you were talking to me. Impactful!
12th Dec 2022 6:50pm
When I wrote this I was talking to you. I'm glad you heard me. I really am abashed at never replying before. I tend to lose my way and then come full circle back to this, my favorite poem and personal anthem. Do you reread your poems to help find your center as I do?
12th Dec 2022 6:24pm
Dang
Deep
Change reality with the power of our dreaming
A line to live by
Thank You
Deep
Change reality with the power of our dreaming
A line to live by
Thank You
12th Dec 2022 6:45pm
